For my third essay I really want to make sure my argument is strong and easy to follow. I want the reader to be able to relate to my opinions and to see the direction I want the paper to go in.   I want to reorganize my paper a bit so my ideas make more sense. I originally thought to add some more examples but instead I think I want to focus on the one’s I already have and see if I can add more to them based on the prompt. I think my paper has some good parts but it just needs to be built up more in order for it to be a final paper. I need to work on clearly stating my opinion and not dancing around it, I have to be more direct about my claims.  I think if I read over it a few more times and find what I think needs fixing along with using my peers advice I will have a strong final draft.